Thursday, March 18, 2010

Peer edit questions for Lucas Gansmoe

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes. It says he thinks Minnesota should have funding for films.
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Pretty much.
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes, he did that very well.
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes.
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes, but the word Minnesota is used to much, maybe try the state or something to change it up a bit.
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes.
7. Is the writing clear?
Yes, the writing is clear.

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